V a g a b o n d B r o t h e r
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The times went by with the passing wind,
days of rage, days of wonder, days on end.
We lived, loved and laughed with no thought given
the gathering storm, lying low on a distant horizon
at the far side of our misspent youth. . .
Vagabond brother, your sea anchor's unstuck,
and your ship's coming up fast on the reef.
The hourglass is tipped over and the compass deranged,
spinning madly in vain search of true North,
while the merry madcap laughs up his sleeve. . .
Defined by a generation, encapsulated in a time
of consequence and turbulence we climbed
the peaks of despair, swam in the ocean of our discontent,
searching diligently for the meaningful while
mistaking the ridiculous for the exquisitely sublime. . .
Vagabond brother, your days are indelibly marked
by the misery expressed in the lines on your face,
Happiness is a fading memory of those times past
too quickly, squandered on cheap and tawdry pleasures,
gaily-colored mementos to decorate a dingy gray life. . .
The times that were and the times to come dissolve
into the ever-present now, sculpting the future
from wasted words and wasted time, until nothing is left,
the masquerade is permanent, we stayed too long
at the dance, removing the mask no longer possible. . .
Vagabond brother, you've cheated life of meaning,
you pass anonymously by in plain sight,
Cast down and cast away on the shoals
you once danced in defiance of, in merry
abandonment, now left abandoned on the street corner.
22 comments:
Hi,
Thanks for stopping by my journal and commenting. This is a wonderful journal you have and I see you have accomplished a good bit in your life. I'll be back to read more.
I still think you need to write a book!!!!!! lol
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WOW! SO YOU CAN DO THIS AS WELL? YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE........WHAT A GIFT!
COURTENAY
Wow Bruce... I may be wrong but what I got from this was one who chooses the immediate cheap thrills over one who chooses, very deliberately, the LIFE that affords him, not only the opportunity to be, do and experience more...the vagabond is left with a case full of "paste jewelry" whereas the other is in possesion of rare jewels which are invaluable....you really should consider a memoir. Penny
this makes me cry each time I read it. I've read it a couple times already.
Life is sometimes so sad....But tears and laughter are sometimes hard to disconnect. Onward we sail through churrning waters...
Maryanne
Your poems, for the most part, are melancholy. If you were a bird, I would have to say you'd be a whippoorwill. (dang, I knew how to spell melancholy but can you believe... I had to look up whippoorwill!)
Thank you for your comment. I enjoy reading intelligent insight. I also found your "Something I Meant To Say," very surreal.
Good Night,
Gabreael
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for some reason, this reminds me of my mom...so life weary and worn out..makes me feel sad.
Great poem...very touching...this would make a great song.
<3 rachel
Very nice!
WOW! Glad I finally got to catch up on my journal reading. That was a great entry. More please.
Tammy
I'm glad you stopped by my journal and left your link. This is a beautiful melancholy poem. I look forward to reading more.
Monica
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What an awesome poem. I read it several times before posting a comment. I'm looking forward to reading additional entries. Thanks for visiting my journal.
-Barb- http://journals.aol.com/barbpinion/HEYLETSTALK
This is very touching. You certainly have a gift. Thanks for sharing .... Tina
Wow, your really good at this, thanks for stopping bye I will surely be back.
wow.....i love that part about happiness being a faded memory of past times, squandered on cheap and tawdry pleasures.......... this one sentence could describe most of my life. these poems are so good and well written.......do you have any published........or had any thoughts of publishing them? just curious b/c that's always been a secret dream of mine......to publish my own book of poetry. mine don't even touch how good yours are, though.
I love your work. You have not only felt love in your life but loss,heartbreak,and a sense of time well spent and time sqaundered.It shows in your writings they are beautiful which usually comes from experience........~carrie~
"Change is good, but too much of it is like too little, things blur and lose focus." :) Seems when ya left that comment in my journal... it came from a guy who knows what he's talking about, eh? Thanks for visiting my journal.... decided to reciprocate, and am suitably impressed. Beautiful stuff here, very moving. I'll be back to see more of it!
~Dawn
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Bruce, you always move me when I read your journal .......and you make me think. Thats good ........putting my mind in motion is a good thing .......Diane
You created such a sadness with your beautiful words. Feeling is what the words should always be about and you have given us a wonderful example with this entry. Thank you Pennie
your music makes me want to do a hoe-down and than cry at the same time. thank u very much.
Ok, this is about the 6th time I've read this. Simply put, it's beautiful. I imagine I'll come back again to read this.........
Rebecca
My brother grew up in the 60's, I was starting a family, but I remember those times, I wasn't out there experiencing the unrest, of a turbulent time, but I understood what his age group were going through. So many people hold those things deeply in their hearts.
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