S E V E R A L S C H E M A T I C V I E W S
I Memories through a selective prism of kodak charisma,
of the precarious Icarian flight, from suckling to soaring:
An indentured adventurer blessed with an eagle-eye-view,
a disputatious super-computer with piggy memory banks,
And an overly irrational national dysfunctional compulsion.
II The seven o'clock newsmovie presents patent pageantry:
presenting a long hot summer night-time necromance,
several hot apple pie life slices with stoned jewelled junkies,
Sugar-cured canned ham condominium comedians,
token mothersmokers and marshmallow dramatic actors,
in congruent competition with diametrically symmetrical
goofy, spoof-outs inevitably involving street corner cowboys,
slick, hick dicks and lotsacops, fighting the long-lost good fight.
A puerile surrealistic look at a speculatively furtive future,
or a peculiar, particular first-person glance at a distant past.
Indifferent distortion diffused through an influential geriatric lens.
III The inflation exponential reaps car-payment paychecks
as festering investor-owned corpulent mega-corporations,
deviously double-dealing in various Aryan excuses,
serenely, obliviously, sail by on sealing-wax wing-tips,
making their ponderous way toward an unforgiving future.
17 comments:
THIS WAS GREAT!!! MADE ME LAUGH;)
~CARRIE~
"stoned jeweled junkies" is my new favorite phrase!
Marti
I'd love to have the use of you mind for just ONE day. This is a great entry. Really enjoyed it. Barb- http://journals.aol.com/barbpinion/HEYLETSTALK
Dang! This is waaaay too much for my mind to process...must be the sultry heat making my head throb! Very profound. :o)
I dig your animation, it got my head spinning! I'll take door #3, Bob.
Best,
Judith
http://journals.aol.com/jtuwliens/MirrorMirrorontheWall
Irrational national dysfunctional compulsion.... how apropos!!! Glad to see ya back, Bruce!! Penny
wonderful use of words, frolicking together, and teasing the mind. Your so very smart.
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow thoughts to whirl around for a few days.
If your word usage could be bottled we'd all be wealty! Frankly, this was as fun as reading can get. I love it! Did you hear the standing ovation? Pennie
WQW! CMP
Anarchitek..
You are an awesome writer of all written words ever..
jo..Tagalongangel....
You are an awesome writer of all words ever.
jo..Hannahthemaid....
Hello..
I just dropped in and i caught these pages of yours sleeping..And may i say to you..wake up these pages of yours..or more please!
jo..Hannahthemaid....
LOL...Impressive!! Someone who has a real command of the language....want to have some fun..here are a few more to add to your collection....can you use them as creativly? Can you use them all in the same sentence!!! LOL
acromonogrammatic
verbum sapienti
balaniferous
xenodocheionology
zwitterion
quadrumanous
I enjoyed your writing!! Marie in TN http://journals.aol.com/galadriel92000/AFishOutofWater/
If you do the one offered below, I wanna see it. LOL
I really liked your Vagabond poem.
Take Care,
Gabreael
Now for something really silly and absent of four syllable words, but that's why it's fun. You can't gush big words all the time, after 7 PM, you're allowed to slide into a few brief, but entertaining silly sentences . . . and ponder flying and other such things.
http://journals.aol.com/cyndygee/TheRealWorldofcyndygee
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