The Voyage Through Time and Space
in a fog, dazed and refused, reaching for another brass ring,
whirling on a roller coaster of thrills and disasters, up once,
down again, reeling from the impacts and consequences, doing
what needs to be done, what has to be done, blindly grasping
for a solution that tantalizes in the mist, partly seen, mostly
guessed at, always one step out of reach, slippery and hard
to get a grip on, as the wheels spin merrily around and round
every corner a new danger, a fresh adventure, another chance
to slip on the proverbial banana peel, stumble onto a great idea
fall in or out of love, find the answers or lose your way, each
an option, a choice, a possibility, until time finally runs out
and you ware washed up on a foreign shore, to start all over
again, a new day, a new way and another chance to do it right.
22 comments:
Wow. Thought provoking. I love it. C. http://journals.aol.com/gdireneoe/thedailies
Thanks Bruce I needed to hear that...instead of considering my life over and literally washed up...I need to see I am really just in another place and maybe it feels like foreign soil but it might be the first day of a brand new life and maybe I will get it right this time...I hope and I pray I do...that banana peal was getting very old! cmp
Very nice! ~ Lori
As always your entries are worth the wait. Love it!!! Robin
Interesting as always Bruce. I love your prospective view of things.<<CARRIE>>
You know, if you had written this yesterday I would have thought
"That Bruce sure knows how to make "Mondays Suck!" sound eloquent."
:)
Chris
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I've missed your entries....Thank goodness for second chances, eh?
Interesting and very original. Glad to see you posted something new! Wondered where you have been. Take care, Brandy
thats very good..
take care!
~jackie~
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Ahhhhh...Yes incredible....
Hope all is well...this is an icredible thought process Bruce!!
Love it!
Jodi
Just when my checks of your journal seemed fruitless, alas, here is a new entry!! Thank you so much for sharing your words........I'll be back for a re-read and absorbtion.
Rebecca
Every time I come here I leave with a yearning to be able to string the words and thoughts into lovely contemplation such as you can. In other words, I'm just plain envious of your amazing talent. You can take the human condition, whether pain or happiness, and create beauty for the mind to absorb. Thank you, Pennie
Bruce, That was so awesome, I had to read it twice. Hope you're well.
Love & hugs
Lahoma
Sure makes you feel the possibility!
To me it sounds like a great adventure! Good to see you back at your journal again!
Boy did you get that right!
It's been a while, Bruce. I'd forgotten what I was missing!
Maryanne
Stopped by looking for an update and just had to read this one again.
hugs and blessings
Lahoma
I so enjoy reading what you write. I enjoyed this entry so much I read it several times, focusing on each group of words as if it were a story.
Have a TERRIFIC day, my friend.
Barb- http://journals.aol.com/barbpinion/HEYLETSTALK
I was trying to see if you were posting or not. I never heard from you about your trip to New York..did you have a good time with the boys? I couldn't believe how much running you were going to be doing from city to city...hope you had a wonderful time...Sandi http://journals.aol.com/sdoscher458/LifeIsFullOfSurprises
Bruce, where are you??? How was the NY trip??? Hope all is well in your corner of the world....Penny
i'm in awe, You write beautifully, i had forgotton what i was missing
Ditto. As an afterthought, "No need to slap anyone."
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