Thursday, October 6, 2005

In Another Time and Place

G H O S T S

Clouds sail serenely on by, puffs of wispy cotton in a far-off dreamy blue sky.

Sunlight beams down on the muddy brown below, shadows shifting, flitting

Among green strands in every kind of a riot of growth, the jungle primeval.

 

Hold! Quiet! Shhhhhh!

 

A moment stretches out into the vastness of time, lifetimes seem to pass,

Breaths shallow and quietly raspy, in, out, in, tension so thick to even dull

New machetes, nerves so tight a single sound would make them snap in pieces.

 

Eyes! Ears! Check it out!

 

What had been almost a pleasant stroll in a garden gone wild and dangerous,

Is on the brink of brutally savage and impersonal, inhuman violence, waiting

As fingers that are run up, then down, triggers, grips loosen, then tighten.

 

Click! Snap! What was that?

 

A figure stands in the undergrowth, all in black, barely visible in the shadows.

Another rises from a clump of bushes, a cone hat like the bushes themselves.

The sticks in their hands raise, transforming into flames as beautiful blossoms.

 

Rat-a-tat-tat-tat-rat! Rat-rat-a-tat!

 

The all-too familiar death rattle of a Kalishnikov spits out rows of angry bees,

Swarming now from every side, the tinny clatter of M-16 answering as we all

Seek whatever shelter we can, returning fire, amid the karumph of grenades.

 

Drop! Duck! Cover! Return fire!

 

Randy, the BAR man, and his loader, chop the vegetation, searching for hidden

Charlies, the unseen body of the ambushers, who wait for the first break in fire,

To unleash their own furies, rushing the line, as we have learned, too painfully.

 

Phone! Red Ranger 9! Gimme some fire support!

 

Manny takes a bad hit to his leg, a fountain of blood spraying over Danny, both

Friendly rivals at baseball, on our off time. Danny calls “Medic”, pulling his Aid Kit

To slap a field dressing onto Manny’s leg, then popping an ampoule into his thigh.

 

Stay down! Keep low! Direct your Fire!

 

Danny rolls Manny over, his gray-brown face already blank from shock and the

Morphine, as his life seeps into the muddy soil. The medic crawls up, darting from

Tree to bush, taking over care, now, disregarding bullets flying from every angle.

 

Phone! Red Ranger 9! Hot pick-up to go!

 

Georgie, always with a good joke ready, pops smoke, throwing it into the clearing,

He raises just a hair too much and takes a 7.62 mm round to the chest, falling back.

Billy, the medic, tries to get to him, as he whispers “Anna” to that clear blue sky.

 

Medic! Medic! Cries from Two sides!

 

The L.T. is scrambling over to check on his platoon sergeant, these two are who we

Look to for guidance and instructions, just 21 and 30, much too young to be old this

Fast and furiously, but on them all eyes are flicking toward, seeking the way out.

 

Phone! Arty! W.P.! W. P.!

 

I am screaming into the handset, at the F O, to get me some mail, right damn now!

He’s busy telling me my coordinates are wrong, and I’m yelling, “Don’t worry, because

In another five minutes, it won’t matter anyway,” and he says, “It’s your funeral, pal!”

 

Ka-Blam! Blam! Ker-Whomp! The earth vibrates!

 

The mail falls just short of landing right on top of our ragged little line, but Charlies

Got his nerve up, to come in close, to finish us off, and they catch it right in the face,

Disappearing in flashes of fire, bas the arty finishes its 30 mile race to get there first.

 

W. P.! W. P.! Same place, gimme all you got and make it snappy!

 

The jungle erupts in a spasm of evil fire, a fire so hot water just boils when poured on it,

The only way to even slow it down is to pack it with mud, bloody mud, and keep your head

Lower than your belly button, as Hell itself opens the gates and comes spilling out!

 

Quiet! Sudden and deep! Moans, pleas to Mama, Lord!

 

The enemy still alive after the last Arty salvo, has melted back into the jungle

The wounded cry and curse, regardless of language, and the L.T. has blood smeared

Across his face, one arm dangles at his side, a long bloody rip in his fatigue jacket.

 

Whomp-Whomp-Whomp-Whomp-!

 

The medevac bird comes circling in,watching our smoke, the door-gunner hanging off

The skid, his 50-cal swinging back and forth alert to any remaining threat, keeping

His pilot safe as these crazy angels in green swoop down to pick up our wounded.

 

Call out! Who’s in the worst shape?

 

Billy, still moving from patient to patient, closes Manny’s eyes, his baseball shoes

Now hung up forever, then moves on to Georgie, and signals the medics with a rolled

Stretcher, before rushing over to Dick, the Platoon Sergeant, propped against a tree.

 

Report! Who’s still walking?

 

Billy tells him two dead, one probable, two seriously wounded, including the Sergeant

Who took three rounds in a neat pattern across his abdomen, but Dick waves him off,

Worried more FOR the L.T., on his first combat patrol, supposed to be a cakewalk.

 

Load this man!, And these two!

 

The L.T. sits as Billy slaps a sucking wound dressing on Dick, he has suddenly grown

From 21 to age-old in less than 15 minutes in an unholy baptism of fire, watching his

Sergeant loaded on the chopper, now in a rush to leave, a gunship above to keep post.

 

Red Ranger 9! Patchme thru to the aid station!

 

We have two KIA and three serious WIA inbound and bleeding, the rest are walking.

We need a dust-off ASAP, then the L.T. takes the phone and gives an after-action

Report to the C.O., citing the brave and the dead, all the while ignoring his own pain.

 

Digger, take the point! Get a perimeter!

 

We’ve got a ride coming in, a baby Huey, so ugly it’s beautiful, coming to collect

What’s left of 2nd Squad, 1st Platoon, and their borrowed RTO, eight men still

Walking, leaving the green jungle, blood-red muddy ground, rising into the blue.

20 comments:

Anonymous said...

I don't believe there is a comment I can make that would do this post justice.  Thank you.

Anonymous said...

You must have been so scared.....I know Dennis was.  I thank God for helping you to find your way home and curse him for taking my cousin up to his.    

Anonymous said...

I am speechless. What an awesome entry. I am so happy to see you writing again.
Barb- http://journals.aol.com/barbpinion/HEYLETSTALK

Anonymous said...

Well.............you just blew yourself out of THE MOST MISSED JOURNAL VIVI AWARD....it has to go to someone who has not posted in the last three months....now let me see what else I can nominate you for...cMp

Anonymous said...

Wow Bruce...a very powerful imagery filled piece! I could feel the emotions as I walked through this memory. Intense. Thank you for sharing this very deep and personal one with us..
Peace
Jodi

Anonymous said...

speechless, great entry, very well written

Anonymous said...

Bruce,
The imagery lacing this entry was incredible.  I felt the ground shake, smelled the gun fire and smoke, and heard the chopper.  Excellent, man.

Chris
http://journals.aol.com/swibirun/Inanethoughtsandinsaneramblings
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Anonymous said...

WOW! reading this I got chills and my stomach ached. For a second it reminded me of the scene from Forrest Gump when he was bringing his friend Bubba and Captain Dan out of the jungle. And then, as I read on it was more like a scene out of Hamburger Hill.

A sad but great entry Bruce.

hugs

Lahoma

Anonymous said...

Bruce you took my breath away with this piece..OMG you take your reader right there inside the battle. I know I could never understand what you guys went through over there...but you have just given us a glimpse. I'm glad you are writing again...you have been sorely missed.  Sandi http://journals.aol.com/sdoscher458/LifeIsFullOfSurprises

Anonymous said...

Beautiful, terrifying, and inspiring.  This is wonderful.

Anonymous said...

Wow, do you have a gift with words. This made you feel like you were there. Great Job! Thanks for making it.


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Anonymous said...

Congratulations Bruce, on the nominations!!!!!!!!!!!

Peace
Jodi
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Anonymous said...

Just delurking to offer up my Congratulations for your ViVi nominations (note the plural <g>)... So, Congrats!

Anonymous said...

And inside the very vastness of all time ever..headlonging and ever head first  it is i in here..here inside of all hushed quietness of all places not even of or inside of here..for flung i am so inside of all so endless wars of all wars ever..for it is i that have been snagged by all greatness ever..
You are by far one of the most over awesome writers of all wordless words ever.
jo....
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Anonymous said...

Congrats on you VIVI awards nomination!!!

Anonymous said...

The jungle erupts in a spasm of evil fire, a fire so hot water just boils when poured on it,

The only way to even slow it down is to pack it with mud, bloody mud, and keep your head

Lower than your belly button, as Hell itself opens the gates and comes spilling out! OH MAN.....THIS IS DEEP WRITING.....COMPELING, ADDICTIVE AND WONDERFUL! IN THE ENTRY BEFOFE 'GHOAT'S, WAS EXCELLENT ALSO. MY STEP BROTHER WENT TO NAM, WAS A PARATROOPER, RECIEVED A PURPLE HEART AND STAYED OVER THERE! HE CAME HOME FOR A SHORT TIME-TO SAY HELLO-BUT WENT BACK TO MARRY THIS WOMEN AND HAD 7 CHILDREN! YOUR VERY INTERSESTING, AND YOUR WRITING IS SUPERB. I KNOW GOAST'S IS A KIND OF POEM-SHORT STORY? WELL, I SMELL MOVIE! SCREEN PLAY! MAYBE YOU THINK I'M WAY OFF, OR MAYBE YOU HAVE HEARD THIS BEFORE? THINK ABOUT IT. 'In this dirty old part of the city
Where the sun refused to shine
People tell me there ain't no use in tryin' The Animals

Anonymous said...

Only my tears can say what I feel after reading this, and all I can think of to say is  WHY? why must there be so much hate in the world.

Anonymous said...

Duty, honor, danger, horror ...... a comment on the fleeting nature of "safe."  A picture of the experience.... I appreciate the sharing..... and the healing within myself.

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Anonymous said...

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